I am sure that everyone's goal in English camp is learning Engilish. And there are three optional camps. When I choose the camp which I will go, I'd like my camp to have fun activities and helpful for studying English. So I will choose Ranch West Camp and I will compare and contrast with Camp Big Apple.
Camp Big Apple is a three week camp and it trains students' vocabulary and math skills. All of the Korean teachers teach who are professors with a masters degree. In addition, students live in a dormitory with other students.
Ranch West Camp is a four week camp and the students can choose which subjects they would like to study from among Math, Art, History or other subjects. Also, there are many fun activities such as horse back riding, river rafting, and more. All of the class teachers graduated from local universities, and students will stay in a home - stay situation during the camp.
There are some differences too. In Camp Big Apple, only Korean people teach so we can't communicate well with native speakers. Be honest, Korean teachers don't have good pronounciation so we could be in trouble when we are communicating with native speakers. However, in Ranch West Camp, all of the teachers are from local universities so our pronounciation will be better.
The activities in Camp Big Apple, is totally different to the activities in Ranch West camp. On the one hand Camp Big Apple is just about studying so students will be bored at the activity time. On the other hand, Ranch West Camp is very fun. They are outdoor activities, such as horse back riding and river rafting.
Also we can choose the subject what we want to learn so we could study the subject which is interesting to us. In contrast, Camp Big Apple is just forcing students to do uninteresting subjects. Then, the students will be bored during the class time.
There are some similarities too. Of course, both of the camp is an English camp, and there are both several week camps.
When I choose the camp, that I want to go I'd like my camp to have fun activities and helpful for studying Enlish. I will choose Ranch West Camp by comparing and contrsting with Camp Big Apple.
Tuesday, 16 August 2011
Thursday, 11 August 2011
Shark attacks (skills post 2)
Summary
Someone who swimmed at the open sea they will experience of the scary shark. But it is possible that you will be attacked but it is almost impossible.. Also if you saw the shark and if the shark can't see the chance to attack it will not always attack you.
More people died because of lightning than be attacked by a shark. 180 people died per year because of the lightning in the other hand only 11 people got attacked per year.
Im addition, the people who been drowned are more than people who been attacked by sharks.
However, if you are still worried about the shark attacks, follow the ways to reduce the chance to be attacked by sharks.
Parphrase (the last paragraph)
Playing in groups is the one way that you can decrease the chances of the shark attack. Sharks really like the swimmer who is alone. Also staying away from the water if you are bleeding is a way, becausesharks have a good sense of smell.
Read more: http://www.allheadlinenews.com/articles/90056666?Jackson%20kids%20donate%20artwork%20to%20Children's%20Hospital#ixzz1UaOVqrzJ
Paraphrase
REAL ONE
Michael Jackson's children appeared at the Children's Hospital Los Angeles on Monday to donate some of Jackson's artwork to the facility.
MY ONE
Jackson's children came to Children's Hospital which is in Los Angeles on Monday to give some pieces of their father's artworks to the hospital's patient
Read more: http://www.allheadlinenews.com/articles/90056666?Jackson%20kids%20donate%20artwork%20to%20Children's%20Hospital#ixzz1UmS9sxOK
Someone who swimmed at the open sea they will experience of the scary shark. But it is possible that you will be attacked but it is almost impossible.. Also if you saw the shark and if the shark can't see the chance to attack it will not always attack you.
More people died because of lightning than be attacked by a shark. 180 people died per year because of the lightning in the other hand only 11 people got attacked per year.
Im addition, the people who been drowned are more than people who been attacked by sharks.
However, if you are still worried about the shark attacks, follow the ways to reduce the chance to be attacked by sharks.
Parphrase (the last paragraph)
Playing in groups is the one way that you can decrease the chances of the shark attack. Sharks really like the swimmer who is alone. Also staying away from the water if you are bleeding is a way, becausesharks have a good sense of smell.
Article summary
Jackson kids donate artwork to Children's Hospital
summarize
Michael Jackson's children went to the Children's Hospital which is in Los Angeles on Monday to give some of Jackson's artwork to the facility. Prince, 14, Paris, 13, and Blanket, 9, followed their grandmother, Katherine Jackson and aunt, LaToya Jackson, Micheal Jackson's family gave 10 artwork which have Micheal's sign on it. The children also signed in some pieces below Micheal's signature. The artwork is like a pictures of Mickey Mouse, furniture and other things. The artwork will be all over the hospital. The Jackson's children have made public appearances together since their father's memorial ceremony in 2009.
Read more: http://www.allheadlinenews.com/articles/90056666?Jackson%20kids%20donate%20artwork%20to%20Children's%20Hospital#ixzz1UaOVqrzJ
Paraphrase
REAL ONE
Michael Jackson's children appeared at the Children's Hospital Los Angeles on Monday to donate some of Jackson's artwork to the facility.
MY ONE
Jackson's children came to Children's Hospital which is in Los Angeles on Monday to give some pieces of their father's artworks to the hospital's patient
Read more: http://www.allheadlinenews.com/articles/90056666?Jackson%20kids%20donate%20artwork%20to%20Children's%20Hospital#ixzz1UmS9sxOK
Sunday, 7 August 2011
kiss and cry (TV show)
Kiss And Cry is a TV show about figure skating. This program been a issue because of the famous figure skater Kim Yu-Na is the MC of this program and also it was the first ice studio in the world. In this show, famous singer or another people fight together with figure skating by the points of the judge's points and the veiwer's point. And according to the internet only five teams are left but because of one team fail there are only four teams are left.
Because of this GLPS camp I can't see this program at all so I don't know what is going on. So I find the informations of kiss and cry's result with the internet.
The result of kiss and cry
| ranking | actor | dance/dance music | ranking | actor | dance/dance music |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 김병만, 이수경 | 우산을 든 커플 | 4 | 이규혁, 이수경 | flamenco |
| 2 | 손담비, 차오름 | 야광클럽파티 | 5 | 박준금, 김도환 (탈락) | 경성스캔들 |
| 2 | 크리스탈, 이동훈 | Howl's Moving castle | - | - | - |
It's almost Korean but I changed to English as much as I can.
I like this TV show because it is fun and also I like the TV show like beatting together.
Thursday, 4 August 2011
Diary (pretending)
Today, we ate pizza for dinner, but my brothers were not that happy. Because we ate pizza at breakfast and luch too! So we became tired of keep eating pizza! I cannot understand my mom is keep giving us pizza all day! Usualy she always said pizza is very bad for our health, so she don't let us to eat pizza. But now she is keep giving me pizza! At first I was so happy however now I hate my mom because she is giving us pizza so much.
Next day morning, when I was going to eat breakfast there were many foods on the table. My mom said she was crazy yesterday. Also she said sorry and give us many delicious foods and apologize.
I couldn't understand why was she so crazy, but I was happy that my mom came round and I can eat delicious food not only pizza!
reference : http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519,00.html
Chain writing
Once upon a time, Jimmie got a new magical hat. Iwas so happy. So Jimmie brought th hat to hi school, but who got his hat at!. So Jimmie's mother brought it. However, the next day in school someone got my hat again! So Jimmie bought one new magical hat and he left it at his table. Next, he hind near by his hat and did sting operation. Few minutes later, his best friend Joo Joo took his hat and run away! Jimmie ran after Joo Joo, and saw that Joo Joo tern into monster and eating the hat! He was a monster! After the monster eat his magical hat he got a magical power. He got very strong so he get big and break everything! That is not the end, he also ate people and threw rocks and kill people lastly he ate them. The Joo Joo monster was so full, but more people came, and he wanted to eat the people so he threw up and eat more.
But, one day he was sick. He had to go to the monster's hospital. The monster doctor told him that he can live only 3 mounth from now. The monster cried and cried, because he was going to die. So, the monster changed in to very deadly one with a very bad temper and the monster thought 'Why did I eat peopl? Oh my god, I was such a bad monster. I'll change myself!' I will eat onely old people! hat will be fun, too! Then I will die happilly my rest life. The monster went to eat old people, but those people were ready for the invasion of the monster. The people threw flame balls into the monster's body. So the monster got burned and died. So people ate monster meat and live happilly ever after!!!!
But, one day he was sick. He had to go to the monster's hospital. The monster doctor told him that he can live only 3 mounth from now. The monster cried and cried, because he was going to die. So, the monster changed in to very deadly one with a very bad temper and the monster thought 'Why did I eat peopl? Oh my god, I was such a bad monster. I'll change myself!' I will eat onely old people! hat will be fun, too! Then I will die happilly my rest life. The monster went to eat old people, but those people were ready for the invasion of the monster. The people threw flame balls into the monster's body. So the monster got burned and died. So people ate monster meat and live happilly ever after!!!!
Tuesday, 2 August 2011
Essay writing Compare and Contrast class 15
Everyone will go to the English camp to learn English. And there is three camp to choose. When I choose the best camp for me, I will look that the camp has fun activities and is this camp useful to study Eglish. And I will choose Ranch West camp and I will compare ant contrast with Camp Big Apple. First, I will introduce about the camp.
Camp Big Apple is a three week camp and it helps student's vocabulary and math skills. Also all of the activities is about studyinng. All classes are taught by Korean professors with at least a Masters degree from American univerity and studetns will live in dormitorie with other students from around the world.
Ranch West Camp is four week camp and can choose which subjects they would like to study from among: Math, Art, History, Science, Politics, World Cultures and many other things! Also, there is many fun activities like horseback riding, river rafting and hiking. All classes are taught by recent graduates from the local university and students will stay in a home-stay situation for the duration of the camp.
Next, I will contrast and compare Ranch West Camp and Camp Big Apple.
In camp big apple only Korean people teaches so we can't communicate well with native speakers. Actually, Korean people is not that good and the pronounciation so we can be in trouble when we communicate with native speakers. But, in ranch west camp recent graduatesfrom the local university teach us, so our pronounciation can be better then learning with Korean proffesers.
Also the activities have a big difference. The activities in camp big apple is just about studying, so stuedents can be boring. But, the activities in ranch west camp is so fun. There are all outdoor activities~!
And we can choose the subject so we could be interested about studying because we choose the subject. However, in camp big apple we just study boring things we don't want to study the we can't remember what we study.
When I choose the best camp for me I will look that the camp has fun activities and is that useful to study English, and I choose the ranch west camp by comparing and contrasting with camp big apple.
Camp Big Apple is a three week camp and it helps student's vocabulary and math skills. Also all of the activities is about studyinng. All classes are taught by Korean professors with at least a Masters degree from American univerity and studetns will live in dormitorie with other students from around the world.
Ranch West Camp is four week camp and can choose which subjects they would like to study from among: Math, Art, History, Science, Politics, World Cultures and many other things! Also, there is many fun activities like horseback riding, river rafting and hiking. All classes are taught by recent graduates from the local university and students will stay in a home-stay situation for the duration of the camp.
Next, I will contrast and compare Ranch West Camp and Camp Big Apple.
In camp big apple only Korean people teaches so we can't communicate well with native speakers. Actually, Korean people is not that good and the pronounciation so we can be in trouble when we communicate with native speakers. But, in ranch west camp recent graduatesfrom the local university teach us, so our pronounciation can be better then learning with Korean proffesers.
Also the activities have a big difference. The activities in camp big apple is just about studying, so stuedents can be boring. But, the activities in ranch west camp is so fun. There are all outdoor activities~!
And we can choose the subject so we could be interested about studying because we choose the subject. However, in camp big apple we just study boring things we don't want to study the we can't remember what we study.
When I choose the best camp for me I will look that the camp has fun activities and is that useful to study English, and I choose the ranch west camp by comparing and contrasting with camp big apple.
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